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Reviews For: Lattes and Biscotti
maxnotevoltage 2005-08-16 . chapter 1
Haha - this is great. I love how you cleverly develop the pupil's curiosity and the master's answers, leading up to that last sentence that ties it all together. Good work - this is what an excellent short story looks like! -- J.max
SlvrSoleAlchmst1 2005-07-19 . chapter 1
I really like the style in which you wrote this. Sort of old-fashioned, but really cool.
Snoop Bunny 2005-07-10 . chapter 1
I like, I like. It's very nice for a short story, and I never would have predicted the answer.
Anima Amina 2005-07-10 . chapter 1
Heh, this is quite original. I actually find it very funny, due to a past experience concerning the same two objects. This is written 1700s stereotypical fashion, isn't it? Short it may be, but I like it. :D
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