I love you.

This was perhaps the sweetest bit of nice original yaoi I've read in a while. You're just so fantabulous, moon maiden of time. I can't even use real words to review any more. I have to use ones like "fantabulous."

(I was actually reminded of the KH Zemyx pairing by this story.)

Aww, it's so old and fluffy... like bunny slippers.

Got bored & decided to see what else you had on FP =) This was cute! Nick was cuter because David put homework ahead of him. But David was still cute. Hehe. =D

It's your little cabbage!Good as usual, Slashy. Is this a one-shot? I hope not, it's interesting!

Have you joined khinsider yet? I'd like to see you on there!

Nick sounds like a push over. Not a fasinating first chapter, but I'm sure you could make it into something really cool. Go for it. Update, and I'll review, if only to yell at you for stupid mistakes. (I'm kidding, I didn't see any.) David sounds manipulative. I like him already. What? Are you waiting for a singnal? UPDATE! Ta ta,Aysel!

Just what I needed (some fluff to make my day better.) This is absolutely freaking adorable. Loved this part: [Look what he does to me. One hug and I turn into goop.] Very melt worthy, I'd say. Lol. *LOVED* this. Hopefully you'll write more (fluff?) and I can fangirl over that too.

How adorable! I feel so squishy now...::pokes stomach:: Great job! Slash is fantabulous and even if people dont like slash, this is too cute to flame lol.

Cute. And a rather good short read. There's a very nice story and lovely writing to it. Bravo.

Well its a good story some spelling mistakes but good.Keep at it.I want to read more!