i.. love this. it has this emotion to it that i can't put a name to- it captures the essences of both the flower and whoever you're talking about. great work.

Cool; very cool.

Ooh! I really like this one. Espically the last few lines. Good job.

i dont get what the flower has to do with this, but still a great poem! quite good imagery with a nice ending. well done!(FF14)