'Another entry by a careless sheen', I really like your style of expressing things.

(being off topic is all right, and 'are you gaga' is really the sort of question that's usually directed at me. I don't really understand what you want to say with that taste thing, but all right. Excuse my poor English.)

(msn is an instant messenger system)

Instants, I believe, can change the entire structure of your life. For the better, maybe, but you'll never really know how much better it could have been. That's the ridiculousness of choice. Sigh.

More cannot be sieved from my mind atm, it's not fully recharged. My weekend is almost over :(

Shalom.

reminiscent of the old medieval love stories I like to indulge in. this is so gorgeous and utterly amazing. what more can I say?

* noelle

I think it is love things to my opinion. but it's very well described in that way and a little happy for once. great job!

Sorrow

Darling, darling, you know I love this poem so much. It's so delicious... I can't describe it. Princesses and needles and queens and all that fantastic finery... It's what you're best it.

I love you, darling.

Ne me quitte pas mon cher.

I'm not sure I got the meaning of this, but the imagery was good and the poem was original. Sometimes I feel that your writing is precise in the sense that you seem to be being very careful when you choose the words; your poetry lacks cliches, which is why I get that feeling. Great poem.

Beautiful poem! It's very well written! I love it.

Interesting... like the rhyming in this poem... funny how the smallest things can kill, and how the wounds may never be visible.

A fine blade to the heart.

At least that's what I got from this piece. Good job.

-Sunami Silverblade

I do have a sense at what it may be about, but I dont think its close.

I really love this, so... poetic. youre too poetic.

Naomi

PS: I'm home...

Nice description.

reminds me of a medieval love story, written, especially the rhyming scheme!

tuesday

Rather sad but I do like it though.