|Reviews for Years have passed|
| paul klees dancing girl 7/10/05 . chapter 1
Yay! FIRST REVIEWER!
Praise:I like the repeated first stanza; it helps solidify the point you're trying to make. I also like the fragments you skillfully placed along the way. Suggestions:I think you should try more symbolism or descriptive metaphores to get your settings/emotions across. It just adds to your already great writing.