I just love your lyric's there really powerful and full of emotion unlike some people's writing.

Oh wow. I adore this. It is so pretty and different. It has emotion that carries through the poem and makes the reader feel the pain. You are awesome.

Very nice meaning. I feel it...I honestly do...but I would use a different metaphors other than "wounds" and such, simply because so many people do. It's hard to be original. Once again, very good meaning behind it.