Reviews for Another chance - FictionPress.com

Benjamin - To Be Deleted 2006-03-21 ch 1,	''You are not more'' get rid of the 't' at the end of 'not'. "Hear you sweet voice" change 'you' to 'your'. Excelent poem... sadly melodic, but optimistic at the same time.
writingonpaperx 2006-03-18 ch 1,	I love this, it seems it has real meaning behind it. Good job :)
Caelestis Leaena 2005-10-30 ch 1,	so poignant and lovely, and the longing is really conveyed well. was well worth reading!
beti213 2005-07-10 ch 1,	yeah but try not to remember that too much if you're trying to move on :) I like this because it's clear and simple. you probably could add some color but as it is, it is still pretty. good job.