Reviews for What if the world were perfect

Something from Nothing 2005-08-16 ch 1,	abuseJOSHY! You poor baby!! YOU'RE AN ANGST BOY! AH!Stop rhyming dammit! You might write betyter if you didn't...cause you did...at least at the beginning!
crazyrocktard 2005-07-19 ch 1,	abuseJosh hey its cass, i like it ...hehe okay bubi old buddy old pal...
MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 2005-07-10 ch 1,	abuseThat is nice. It makes me think. You are talented.
graffiti-skies 2005-07-10 ch 1,	abusewhoa, amazing poem!! love the repetition and love the way it all flows together!!
Colonel Augen 2005-07-10 ch 1,	abuseNice style. Interessting questions, pattern well layed, in other wors I liked it and felt the questions as if my own.