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| Pure Autumn 2005-10-10 ch 1,   | wow this is really powerful |
| Cloud Burst 2005-08-16 ch 1, | wow - the last line just echoes through my head... creepy.. very beautiful, in the morbid way. death is beautiful. ya i know thats very opinionated but. keep up the awesome work!! |
| KonekOniko 2005-07-25 ch 1, | I liked this piece, it kept my attention throughout the whole poem. It was wonderfully done and powerful. The style was just...breathtaking. Great job, really hope to see more from you. ^-^ |
| simpleplan13 2005-07-21 ch 1, | wow... very very powerful & berautifully written |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-07-18 ch 1, | Good comeback. Loved the line "tormenting his already broken soul." The questions such as hearing heaven or hell and the comment about angles and devils seem very apt. As I think most of us will wonder where we will finally go. I liked how you described his hair and lips. Luv Kaitx |
| poetic abortion 2005-07-13 ch 1, | beautiful and sad. ~* noelle |
| underminingfaith 2005-07-11 ch 1, | I didn't see the title at first, so I only realised it was about death in the last stanza. But maybe that's just me being slow, because all throughout the poem there was a strong sense of horror and hopeless despair. nice rhythm as well. |
| Eagle Seance 2005-07-10 ch 1, | great (as usual!) I liked the reality of the poem. this is an excellent take on death (i almost sound enthusiastic about the subject, but i'm not! your poem's good). write on! |
| lackluster 2005-07-10 ch 1, | wow! this is mesmerizing and beautifully sad. lovley!! |