very nice. something everyone can relate to. very clear, ver driven. nicely done! kudos!

Beautiful and brutally honest. I love the way you put this together. Nicely done!

ANd thanks for the reviews of my recent work!

~Hawke

"Your fingers drawing blood from my veins"...great line. I also like the ending, the last line tied it together very nicely. The idea of someone being able to take yourself from you is very profound.

Whoa. Kickass. Good emotion use with the words.

nice. nothing more to say but nice. except for maybe very nice...

great work! i really like how you bring the title into the work. or... took it from the poem...? yeah i don't know. but you did a very nice job summing it all up in the end. i like that ^_^

okno idea how to reply to reviews on this site [onli just got it]so im replying to the review you gave me here, as im confused.thanx for the review, and she's already read the poem and was all "aww"shes away in saudi for a few weeks so i was sat missing her, thought id just write a poem and see how it went, no idea how long it was until i had finished writing it and clicked word count.

your poem here.. is awwed, are you alrite?hope everything gets better for you.x

ps. could you tell me how 2 reply to reviews properly, is is this the onli way 2 do it?

i know what this feels like, having someone control you to the point where you can't even do anything you want anymore, well something like that anyway...very nicely written, i see the emotion and thoughts in these lines, well done...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

Great job! I really liked this!

Bloody AWESOME! I didn't know you had a fictionpress account too!!

Oh hunni *hugz you tightly and refuses to let go* I am so sorry...I wish I could snap my fingers and make this problem go away. I will respond to your email and pray that it goes through. And just know that I am thinking about you always and I am always here for you. I love you so much!

kewl. my friend has been in a situation very much like this, tis a hard thing...the line: 'i never want to cry until you speak' seems a little off to me, i don't know why...*not very helpful* but i love the res, espicially the last bit. very cool. *now done wasting your time, and on to waste more time reviewing other stuff of your's!*

Hidden, bless your heart for your kind words and thoughtfullness. It means a lot to have you, one of my first and most adament fans review my latest work. It was great seeing your review. Again, thank you so much.

Now, the last line and how it ties into the title and the rest of this poem is what makes this piece special. It is very meaningful and I liked the repetition at the end. Tasteful and a pleasure to read.

Keep writing Flame ^_~

Great and very angsty...angst is good tho...thanks 4 mi reviews ^_^ if i write anything bout HBP i will email it 2 ya, but right now sum1 else is doing that...*growls* damn foolish mortals..oO dw bout me, umm yer, i cant wait ONE AND A BIT DAYS LEFT ^_^^_^^_^Cya l8er ^_-

wow, poppetje, such a dark poem?! but I like it!! The sad/mad and hurt feelings come across very well!