I'm horrible at poetry comprehension. I really, truly am. But your diction is amazing. Not necessarily a high one, but definitely...captivating. Words outside of the every day use that fall into one another and create a flow that makes you want to read it aloud.

It's been awhile since I've read your work.

Beautiful poetry. I know from experience that it takes quite a bit of energy to write such a poem, so well done. I hope that your luck will improve with your personal problems. I hope that things get better for you. Lots of love from Olympia. x

nice use of metaphors, the words here seem to be expertly chosen and the flow is definitely haunting in it's own respective way. Keep writing. -Arcane Devices (a.k.a. ADD)