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| Kraig Havelock 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHiya! I'm Emma's friend Shadow ^^ Great fic! I love it! No names, just faces and the runaway train idea is so original! |
| xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuseHello. I'm a friend of Profiterole, who's been my pen pal for a long time, and she's just the most awesome person ever ^^ The story itself was well written, nice short and fluid prose that expresses so much even in its brevity, an interesting set up. All and all, an awesome read. Conclusion? Excellent writing. chibichocobo |
| Mizu-Yoru-Tsuki 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseI agree, very poetic! I like it! I don't usually read this sort of thing, but I'm glad I read this! |
| Profiterole 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseWow! That's poetic… almost abstract. You sure know how to captivate the reader. And I like how the narrator compares the girl and the guy, even though she doesn't stand a chance from the beginning. |
| NoFx-JuSt-Me 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Great details! |