Reality is twisted...like this poem. To say I'm mad that you do what you do would make me a hypocrite...but for some reason, the way you write about it...it's intriguing. Makes me want to know more...damn you!

Morbid Maxwell-The more you hurt me, the more I love you.

O loved it. And yes you do sound like a very happy positive person! :D

Wow! Your really really really good at putting emotions down into words. The poem doesn't rhyme, at all, and it donesn't have any of the qualities I like in a poem, but I love it.

i like it everything you say is so true and i know exactly where ur coming from especially the bit about the disposable razors thats where i got my weapon from too...well done...so much going on in this, i like it. lots of love AllyCred

if you don't mind me saying darling... if you don't find anything else... you can live for me like i live for you.

I love the last line...I love the whole concept and the anger is perfect.

this was very good, i really liked it. i especially liked the beginning and the end, they were very powerful. this entire poem was excellently written and a good read. i can't find anything to criticize. great job.-alison

this reminds me a lot of my self *sigh* who am i kiddind this is exactly like me