|Reviews for Albion|
| storygirl08 -real sn 7/23/05 . chapter 1
I like the poem. If you shift-enter () in between the lines of the same stanza-thing and then enter () when it should break, that should work.
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/13/05 . chapter 1
| Kicking Poe 7/11/05 . chapter 1
I don't know how to keep it divided unless you put lines between the stanzas. Anyways, very interesting poem. I love mythology and you did a great job!
| queenofthbritons 7/11/05 . chapter 1
wow the creativity is amazing, I would have neevr thought to write a poem about that. I love the ending line, because it explains everything before it. well done :-)
| Luthiena o Lorien 7/10/05 . chapter 1
This was originally broken up...Can anyone tell me how to keep it broken up?The original pattern was 3 lines, then 4 lines, then 3 lines, then 4 lines.