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| Trilock 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI love this. There was a time where I absolutely hated poetry, but it eventually grew on me and now here I am, a writer and a poet. This majestic poem invokes all kinds of sea imagery. It takes a certain amount of talent to transport the reader into another world. Azure paradise indeed... |
| Anime Freakizoid 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseh-o-l-y c-r-a-p, this is great! i really have to say hats off to you for a great job! you seem like you put a lot of dedication in your work and make it sound realistic enough for people to think about the subject too. its a great question of what lies in the sea, another great piece!-anime freakiziod X^_^X |
| BicGirl 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful poem. I love the concept of swaying in the current, and the perfect discriptive words you used.Great job. |
| A p p l e A u t u m n 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseThanks for reviewing my fic! Now I get to review one of yours! (joey_wheelers_yujo from neopets) Anyways, wow...this is a beautiful poem, probably one of the best I have read. Simply perfect! ^^ |
| Nisha Ziarre 2005-09-04 ch 1, | abuseAww... A paradise under the water in your mind. Beautiful! And my sister has purple hair. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseHopeful, an eternal paradise within the mind... |