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Reviews For: The World Inside the Sea

Trilock
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuseI love this. There was a time where I absolutely hated poetry, but it eventually grew on me and now here I am, a writer and a poet. This majestic poem invokes all kinds of sea imagery. It takes a certain amount of talent to transport the reader into another world. Azure paradise indeed...
Anime Freakizoid
2006-08-23
ch 1,
abuseh-o-l-y c-r-a-p, this is great! i really have to say hats off to you for a great job! you seem like you put a lot of dedication in your work and make it sound realistic enough for people to think about the subject too. its a great question of what lies in the sea, another great piece!-anime freakiziod X^_^X
BicGirl
2006-04-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is a beautiful poem. I love the concept of swaying in the current, and the perfect discriptive words you used.Great job.
A p p l e A u t u m n
2005-12-29
ch 1,
abuseThanks for reviewing my fic! Now I get to review one of yours! (joey_wheelers_yujo from neopets)

Anyways, wow...this is a beautiful poem, probably one of the best I have read. Simply perfect! ^^
Nisha Ziarre
2005-09-04
ch 1,
abuseAww... A paradise under the water in your mind. Beautiful! And my sister has purple hair.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-07-10
ch 1,
abuseHopeful, an eternal paradise within the mind...
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