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Devin 2006-06-15 . chapter 9
great cant wait for more. hopefully its soon
Skeptic_Critic 2006-05-22 . chapter 9
You should see some of the things I've done while I was sleeping...I've cleaned my room before...Finished homework that wasn't due for days and that we wouldn't learn until at least the next day...I've drawn more pictures than I can count...I even started writing my problems on a notebook before I went to sleep and there would be times when I'd wake up and see that I'd answered my own questions...I even cooked breakfast while sleeping once...Even though it was three in the morning...My dad walked out and found me as I was finishing the batch of pancakes...

And wow look at that...I've never even heard of Rurouni Kenshin...Although, my knowledge of this kind of stuff isn't very extensive...

Wow...I keep forgettiing where this story began...Tramping through a swamp...
Riku Matsuki 2006-05-21 . chapter 9
i logged in this time woo.

& This chapter def. made up for the shortness of the last one.

And it made me coo.

Lurve yew.
Ebony Glasse 2006-05-14 . chapter 8
If you can write stories over-rated for you, I can read them... how old ARE you? Short but interesting update. ^^
Riku Matsuki 2006-05-12 . chapter 8
why is it so short?! *wail* you big meanie.

but it was good. i liked it.

*poke* more
Skeptic_Critic 2006-05-10 . chapter 8
I'd totally guess who he is...but I haven't a clue...Not a single one...i don't even understand the clue you gave us...

Lack of sleep really is an odd thing...My friend's got insomnia and now everytime she manages to fall asleep she starts drawing pictures and poems...They're really kinda wierd too...And they make sense after like a week or so...It's really wierd...and slightly creepy...Even to her...
IMMe_DealWithIt 2006-03-31 . chapter 7
Nice. I KNOW there's sumthings i can relate to Jae... one, hatred of men.Keep up all ur hard work, n i bet you'll do fine.
Riku Matsuki 2006-03-31 . chapter 7
Bwaha. *reveiwing from lunch detention*

Anyway...I love you.

*says word*
Ebony Glasse 2006-03-17 . chapter 7
nice chappy! yeah! but...uh... did ya like... change the rating? coz... if ya did... i'm underaged... (not tt i pay much attention to tt, actually... hehehehe...)
Skeptic_Critic 2006-03-10 . chapter 7
Lemons? Is that an inside joke or is that one of those things that everybody but me seems to get?

The word...There I said it...Now you gotta post the next chapter...I said the word...Come on...Posty post...

Wasn't that intelligent? I suppose that's what happens when i've had three hours of non consistent sleep...Shoulda seen me after I stayed up for 30 straight hours...I just kept dazing in and out of reality...Bit odd of a feeling...
A Dark White Rose 2006-03-10 . chapter 7
np about the comments.

and poor jae she just saw him have sex w/ trea...either they did or were about to (i would perfere to think they were about to)i wouldn't forgive him he and trea then next thing you kno he's trying to kiss her damn it got me mad i totaly feel for her.

and i have friends who have been rapped and after that they can't trust anyone even ppl who they were friends w/ b4 it happened and even though you see some of jae's thought process i kno she's probably beating herself up for trusting him and a whole lot of other stuff.

and jae has more grace then i do i would have given trea the silent treatment ecct.

awsome chpt. and i'm so glad you reviewed i was afraid you stopped writing this story.

i wish u luck on your writing!
Skeptic_Critic 2006-03-09 . chapter 6
i still think they're adorable together...Don't ask...I have a weird habit of completly gushing over characters who are supposedly, rough, tough, and bad...And then I sit there calling them cute, adorable, and heart melting...I'm very odd...I'm not afraid to admit it...And I can gush forever about the bad boy of any story...It's a knack of mine...A rather annoying one to most...
Skeptic_Critic 2006-03-09 . chapter 5
They're adorable when they're getting along...And hilarious when they're not...He's so cute when he's being a wimp...It's very endearing..
Skeptic_Critic 2006-03-09 . chapter 4
Hehehe...I would love to read about the general and the commander getting together just to read their banter...and blushing...For some reason blushing people in stories amuse me...Among other things...
Skeptic_Critic 2006-03-09 . chapter 3
So now you keep us in the dark...Fine...be that way...I'll just be glad that I have three more chapters to read before I have to wait...With any luck, I'll find out what the heck is going on...
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