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| Wogan May 2006-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseApart from the odd typo, it's very good. Puts knights in a more proper perspective. I was slightly confused towards the end, though. "Pointless, Hopeless"? It breaks the aura of the poem. Don't try to impress by inserting conflicting concepts. Unless you can justify them, of course. I liked it. |
| Cyberknight 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great job with this poem. It's very regal and very proper for this subject. I could see a whole line of Golden Knights marching along reciting this poem. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abusevery confusing at first but gets straightened out in the end. once again very nicely written. ~Sorrow~ |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseQuite nice. |
| Princess Hannah 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting depiction of our favorite medeival warriors. |
| Arkash 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseVery fantasyish, and it gives tribute to the Knights. Good Job! *_* |