i liked it! u do realize that u wrote the same thing twice in the 1st chapter, right?

I'm liking this a lot - particularly the way you balance the mundane with the supernatural, like "My parents found out that I was, you know, 'enchanted', and absolutely spazzed." Ha! My parents would do the same. ;) Great tone here, and lots of intriguing ideas. Looking forward to more!

You're right, this is really good. Have you started on the next chapter yet? The suspense is killing me.

Hey, this is Lili, the one who wrote the essay Write Right! Anyway, I thought I would review some of your work, and so far I am really enjoying it! The entire idea is very good and well-develloped, and I am very much enjoying reading it. There are a few grammar errors and in the first chapter you wrote the same thing twice, so you might want to correct that. Other than that, lovely job!

I read the story again, and it was still just as great as the first time.