Yes!I can relate, oh yes, I 's all seemingly like a breath of fate because we can only see through our own eyes and never anyone eles. We would dream that these wonderful things can merge, like in the perfect scene of that perfect movie; but life as it has always been and always will be cannot teach the difference of another's thoughts from our own. No, we always say to ourselves, thinking (but not really) of a time now or never when we were on that wonderful stage and how it felt when the lifeblood tries to rearrange us.

Isn't poetry fun?

Most sincerely,S.I.M.

I like all your work, but this one in particular! Thanks for the wonderful compliment also!

Thank you for reviewing Final War!

Your poem...it is so really describes real relationships and also gives you a dream of a 'perfect couple', but also doesn't.

I know, !

My favorite line is...

"Caged criminals

in high top mansions

glittering

against opal skies"

This is a gorgeous poem. It also has kind of an abstract feel to it, in my opinion, Thanx for the review. Keep up the wonderful work.

Oh my goodness Oh My goodness. Fabulous, Truly, truly, fabulous. I can think of no other words. Well Done.

Solo.

Wow, absoloutely amazing... *adds to favourites*

It's so beautiful and mesmerizing. The word choice and fluency is great. I love it.

Goodness, this is beautiful. You are amazing. Simply amazing, my love.

powerful, sad, and beautiful all at once...

-K

wow, some real nice imagery there. liked the middle a lot.

thanks so much for reviewing my Shards of Ebony ;)

Wow, I like the feeling in this. It's rather haunnting and kind of creepy in a way.

i love this poem! wow. wow. i tried to add it to my favorites but it says ive reached the limits . . .lol, fantastic ;)

Very thought provoking and inspirational. I liked this a lot, it's not your everyday love poem. Beautifully written. -Kevin

truely beautiful!

A caress for the dark side of my soul this is:flow of consciousness used in this way is a gift

And love to youhf