of course, i loved this story too. my only thing is, did you mean this to be a short story? i think you could have easily stretched it out to make it as long as the first. another thing is we never really got to see Davin in battle or even when he was away besides that one conference. there were many other things you could have added or elaborated on. i almost felt like every time you skipped months or years, that i was sad, like i missed something. so yes, i did fall in love with ALL of your characters!! like i said there is absolutely nothing wrong with this story AT ALL. i just think you could make it longer and more descriptive if you added to it. needless to say (but i will anyway) GOD JOB! hope to read more from you soon (mb there will be another short story about Davin and Jaylin and then dealing with Davins new fame? *wink wink*) i'll wait patiently lol.

~Heather

YAY U FINISHED THE STORY YAYAYAYAYA

oh it was really good! and I'm glad for the happy ending!

(tears up) God, I just...love happily ever after...fair tale endings with weddings...love conquers all!

YAY!! 3 cheers for Davin!

Heh, sorry it took me so long to read, but I just managed to get to it and I didn't wanna skip to 10...

Even better than staked, he was beheaded! (cackles)

Bastard! I hope he gets staked!

A great end to a great story. Ah...I cried that it had to end. Will be looking for more stories from you. Good luck with school.

Barb

awe, I like a happy ending too. I'm really glad you finished the story... You did good.. Good luck with any upcomming projects.

yay, thanks for putting in another chapter. This one was really good. It had me on the edge. I'm glad that Davin survived, even though we all know how much I love my Kenyon.

Another great chapter. I do feel sorry for Kenyon, but he had it coming to him for not being honest in the first place. Keep up the great work and of course, I am waiting for your next update.

Barb

Another great chapter. Sorry to see this one end soon. But to continue with short stories is a good idea because you can always go back and rewrite the whole story in one long one. Waiting for your next update.

Barb

I just wrote you the longest message/review and my damn computer erased it before it sent.. Damn now I have to remember it! Anyway I of course am still here, reading, and in love with your story. lol.. I'm glad that you started updating again, because I missed it. I am happy Kenyon's back in the story in person. I missed that crazy bastard. Sometimes I actually pity him. I don't want Kenyon to die. Sniffles... He can be a major ** though. Poor Jaylin has to put up with his nonsense. Ah my arm hurts. I must go for now. Keep up the excellent work.

Oh no! What a bastard! There's nothing stronger than a mother's love for her child...but then again, no one's ever tested that theory against Kenyon, now have they?

WOw, I'm so happy you updated!

Yeah! Great chapter. Looking forward to your next update. I just hope that Kenyon does not hurt the kids, but then again if he does, Jaylin might never be the same. Guess that I will have to wait and find out. Hope that you update soon. Barb

So pessimistic..then again, who could be optimistic during war?

Yeah...an update. I really enjoyed the chapter. To let you know, I am a big Christine Feehan fan. lol. Well, anyway looking for your next update. Soon I hope.