I loved every single poem. I thought the idea of putting your poems side by side, like a mini book was a very original idea. I am a vivid dreamer myself and I keep a dream log, so the various poems had a personal significents to me. I especially liked the one about the angel and the begger. Nicely done. I really like your writing style. It's full of imagery and is very fluid. Keep up the good work! ^^

what really shines through in this collection is the fact that your style can vary so much. You can create haunting images, loving ones and others which seem almost impartial to human nature. There's definately depth here that goes beyond words-absolutely beautiful!

Wow! This had a really neat rhyme scheme that I thoroughly enjoyed. It made the poem sound very bouncy and upbeat when read aloud. Good job, I liked this one a lot!

Your wording is great...I especially like the phrase "black flames". Well done.

I'll admit it. I have a tendancy to be daunted by long poems. It's horrible, I know. But I couldn't pull myself away from this one. It was so adorable in its straightforward aabb rhyme scheme, and so delightful in the cleverness and complexity of some of those rhymes. aabb stuff can get annoying, but not this one, because you kept mixing it up.

The fact that the dog was called "Stray" makes me smile. And I'm a sucker for such an uplifting ending.

Simplistic and it was all about a special flower. neat =)

Great Poems. Just a good collection overall. May be some polishing here and there is needed to tune things.

Keep putting this stuff out.

These poems are great! Awesome job!

Another gushy poem to add to my list... Just so you know, you're nothing like the "Old Wise Man" I said you resembled earlier. From not on I will call you Hamlet. *Nods head resolutely.*~Natalie

Aww, so sweet. This was a very mushy poem, one of the few I like too. I liked the part where you refered to the black eyes as a dream you loved.~Natalie