Very interesting format. It definitely catches the eye. Not sure if I fully grasped the whole meaning of it, but it intrigued me, nonetheless, and I did enjoy it.

WOW! You're such great poet. I love this one too. Other than the great meaning, it has such nice cadence to it.

Great job!! Keep it up! *_*

This is awesome poetry, despite its little imperfections. Not that I do better, mind you, for I generally don't like poems, even though I write some occasionally.

I love this one. It has depth and meaning, and *_* it rhymes.

This was so awsomely written. I love all of the poems and things you have written and can't wait to read more.

This is a powerful, well-written poem. I like the format you used -- it's sort of limerick like, but with a different rhythm. Just one thing: you don't close your quotes in the last stanza. Very nice though.

Wow... I have typed a review for this poem about three times but each time I attempted to post it, I was shunned. So, this is my final try, if it doesn't get through I might scream. I liked the last stanza... it made me think about a lot of things. Frustrated,Natalie

Wow... this one was like a smack from the wise stick. I felt like I was reading something an old man was saying, not something a person my age was writing. But, I've realized that you do write like that old man... and however bad it may sound, it is really a complement. You one of the wisest people i know... in any age.~Natalie

I was about a third of the way through this when I began to think I had already read it. But, because I am me... and I remain not enitrely intact mentally, I needed to review so I know that I didn't just fabricate the previous review... I really enjoyed it the first three times, the fourth was equally as enjoyable.~Natalie

There is no way you could hav possible known this but you hit home with this poem. While reading it, I kept thinking, "Damn, this is me." So job well done, in writing a beautiful work... you figured a little bit of me out.~Natalie

This first thing I thought about when reading this was simply... plodding! I love that word! I don't know why, or how, I just love that word. "But aim for the moon and at least if you miss,You'll come to rest among the stars!" this was the best line out of this entire poem, at least in my opinion.I alway liked the water stanza... as I have so apty named it. It made me think... hurray for you! ~Natalie

I read this one too but I don't remember reviewing it... I especially enjoyed the last stanza, it was very interesting, but this is and insomniac speaking, and I havn't slept in a day or two, so I might be fabricating sybomlisms... but, I still liked it, even if I was hallucinating.

I reviewed this one already... but the new ending is better... I like it more.~Natalie

*Lip quivers* Wow, that sounds like a review I said a very long while ago... these were two reall sad peoms... I liked them, see... not reading because I'm stalking, stalking because I'm reading...~Natalie

O... Hi! I'm back! I like this one... it's short and sweet, yet amazingly, still says a lot. I'm making up for lost reivew time so I hope to have about ten more for you along with this one.Sorry I shunned you, Natalie

Now that's pretty neat.