Haha. This is really good. I love your style. Your not overly formal and the poem seems like something you are thinking out loud. Good xxoo

That was great! I loved the ending, "Not over, just out." Completely um...gonna make up a word for how awesome it was...scrumtrelescent! Yep!

haha. i like it, it's so cute. so realistic too. makes me think of myself. i wonder how many people are having the same dilemma at this very moment? )

Haha, I like this! It's cute and it made me laugh. I like the ending, it was unexpected. Keep writing!