|Reviews for i'll keep my wings|
| noxonexhere 10/26/10 . chapter 1
That tugged at the strings attached to my heart.
| BrokenHeart4Eva 4/10/08 . chapter 1
this tells a tale so simply and beautifully that i couldnt tell if i wanted to smile because of the beautiful way you weaved the words or cry because of the pain behind them. absolutely amazing
| Little Crayon 11/13/07 . chapter 1
You've struck me speechless, darling.
Lovely use of emo-tastic though. xD lol.
| guardien 12/6/06 . chapter 1
You've struck oil. You've created a perfect cross in between classic poetry and modern situations and slang.
Well said. The poem, I mean.
| crinkled aster ribbon 3/17/06 . chapter 1
| marshbar960 7/11/05 . chapter 1
very expressive. you are implying that even though the boy left, your heart will still go on. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| LaMSaErArNier 7/11/05 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful...I love the imagery and the concept..great job!
| Aslan Israel 7/11/05 . chapter 1
I thought your (strawberry boy) lipsmight be too precious for minebut then you-you always did know how to lie.
Perfect, as always. Beautiful.
| mercury.love 7/10/05 . chapter 1
I really like the style and imagery in this poem. "(I still think I can fly)I've got head-to-toe glitterdust andribbons in my hair,books of glossy little girl andimjustfinethanks poetry." That part is beautiful... the rest of it is too, that's just my favorite part... Keep writing!