holy. crap.

That tugged at the strings attached to my heart.

Lovely.

this tells a tale so simply and beautifully that i couldnt tell if i wanted to smile because of the beautiful way you weaved the words or cry because of the pain behind them. absolutely amazing

You've struck me speechless, darling.

Lovely use of emo-tastic though. xD lol.

You've struck oil. You've created a perfect cross in between classic poetry and modern situations and slang.

Well said. The poem, I mean.

beautiful/lovely/sparkling.

very expressive. you are implying that even though the boy left, your heart will still go on. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

Absolutely wonderful...I love the imagery and the concept..great job!

I thought your (strawberry boy) lipsmight be too precious for minebut then you-you always did know how to lie.

Perfect, as always. Beautiful.

I really like the style and imagery in this poem. "(I still think I can fly)I've got head-to-toe glitterdust andribbons in my hair,books of glossy little girl andimjustfinethanks poetry." That part is beautiful... the rest of it is too, that's just my favorite part... Keep writing!