Reviews for i'll keep my wings

BrokenHeart4Eva 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abusethis tells a tale so simply and beautifully that i couldnt tell if i wanted to smile because of the beautiful way you weaved the words or cry because of the pain behind them. absolutely amazing
Little Crayon 2007-11-13 ch 1,	abuseYou've struck me speechless, darling. Lovely use of emo-tastic though. xD lol.
guardien 2006-12-06 ch 1,	abuseYou've struck oil. You've created a perfect cross in between classic poetry and modern situations and slang. Well said. The poem, I mean.
crinkled aster ribbon 2006-03-17 ch 1,	abusebeautiful/lovely/sparkling.
marshbar960 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abusevery expressive. you are implying that even though the boy left, your heart will still go on. just my interpretation but i could be wrong. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
LaMSaErArNier 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely wonderful...I love the imagery and the concept..great job!
Aslan Israel 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abuseI thought your (strawberry boy) lipsmight be too precious for minebut then you-you always did know how to lie. Perfect, as always. Beautiful.
mercury.love 2005-07-10 ch 1,	abuseI really like the style and imagery in this poem. "(I still think I can fly)I've got head-to-toe glitterdust andribbons in my hair,books of glossy little girl andimjustfinethanks poetry." That part is beautiful... the rest of it is too, that's just my favorite part... Keep writing!