I like this story very very much. Please update soon!

Like ur story,wanna read more!

uh i liked it but what the hell was up with X's?

they are annoying. but keep up the good work.

Oh my, sounds really interesting! The main character sounds a lot like my big sister... or my big sister used to be like that, she still kind of is. But anyways, the point of this review: good job! Plain and simply writing, I like that. Just don't try to keep it too plain and simple, if you know what I mean. And hopefully you do.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter... if I ever come back that is o_0.

I enjoyed it throughly. Hope you will chose to continue.

I liked the way you opened the story. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.

very good frist chapter but u leave me hanging on to every word please up date soon

This is very good. Please update soon.

Very good! It was kinda sad...I feel really bad for Mariko...Plz update soon!

where's the half-naked wizard? that's all!?!you really have to continue it!and you really like romance don't you?hehehe..(dirty thoughts in mind) continue this story..it would be quite interesting to see what happens

Original and good but short.

Hmm...interesting. What's next? Update Soon!

Very interesting...different. But it is good. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update Soon!

can't explain it. original. good vocab. interesting.