this was a really good story. had every detail of reality in it and you pointed it out very clearly. loved it!

~Sorrow~

This story is a great use of metaphor. Haven't we all felt like girl growing up? The writing is very true to life; good job.

I find this mildly disturbing. But in a good way, of course.

It sort of reminds me of the story 'The Giving Tree', if that's what it's called. I can hardly remember.

lav, this is amazing. reminds me of growing up, very cute and precise. wonderful, wonderful work.

~* noelle

it reminds me of growing up.

little and girl, very clever and interesting story.

intriguing

It almost made me cry! Reminded me a lot of the Giving Tree by Shel Silverstein. Very nice.

Wow, this is somewhat amusing but it has a 'leson to be learned' under it all. nicely done!