great chpter cant wait for the next! :D

Okay, I think you rushed into things, you use the same words in the same sentence.

"I slid my hands on my THIGHS, feeling a heat growing between my THIGHS and I bit my bottom lip."

See you used the word thighs twice in this sentence. Anyway keep writting.

This is a great story, loved it. Can't wait for your nedt chappie! Plus I love sex, so it's even better. Princess!1

Sean's a really bastard for treating her like that. I was a little fast, and she probably should have know better, but still, he's an arrogant jerk for doing that. I like your story...keep up the good work. :)

congrats, im proud of ya! this was a pretty admirable story of the type. could have used a tad more detail and slower pace, but hey, it still rocks my socks! and her ending thoughts, exactly how i felt. but, i really was just used as a piece of **, by josh; who has even forgotten my cell # already. anyway, keep it up if ya want, at least know that i'll be readin' 'em! :cheers: