Very beautiful, and very sad.

Wow, this sent chills up my spine. Very powerful. It was so sad and horrific... Amazing. There were a few spelling errors, but those really don't matter in a piece like this. Excellent.

It's...effortlessly beautiful, Hawthorne-y (in a good sense) and perfectly rhythmic (is that spelled wrong?). I love how you describe the flames and how you make death a more positive transition than most poetry does. So lovely.

so sad, so sweet, write more?

I could feel her pain as she looked at her daughter. Very well done. Gave me goosebumps.

Aww, this is awesome. Fast paced, and the ending was fantastic!

Thanks for all your reviews - )

WOW. dark and vivid... this is very...realistic, if that's possible. nicely done!

tuesday

Ps-about your review, you sunday child: reveal your weight now! lol...j/k,j/k., just keep writing!*winkwink*

I enjoyed how you told this from her point of view. The fact her child had to watch her die made this especially sad. I liked the way you wrote and set this out. Luv Kaitx

What a good point of view! Although I think you should'e mentioned the smell of burning flesh, it was good.