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Need 'n' Know 2007-08-05 ch 4,	abuseYou said you'd update... oh wait. >_< Still kinda confused why there are two Resistance RAIN. I don't need to say anything, do I? O_o Except that, Xane didn't dream of anyone he loved dying. That's a relief. He's hurt, a lot. They're all incredibly tall and pretty, aren't they? @_@ Lol, okay. I'm gonna be a bit busy with more school now, oh, man. The Internet is too much of a distraction, yes... >_> I'll try to finish the rest of the chapters that are up, and the Rewrite. Need 'n' Know
Need 'n' Know 2007-07-18 ch 3,	abuseSo we get to see into Xane's dreams, cool. Nathan, that's sweet. Minna.. sometimes, these girls need to like... calm down. Calm down, Minna! Are you like, having mood swings? laughs hysterically O...kay. Yeah, you really have a tendancy to switch from present to past, and past to present. It's in 1st POV, but... hmm... Zaint is the weirdest name ever. And he kidnapped Minna? rofl Lol, she was kidnapped, you've GOT to be kidding me! NnK.
Need 'n' Know 2007-07-12 ch 2,	abuseMan, Minna's full name is so weird. Heiress, too, nicey. So that's where all the money comes from, lol. Yes, I will call him Semmi, too, a bit easier. Ooh-ooh, I see it, I see it: Minna/Semmi. Kinda the same, see, see? Did you do that on purpose? Well, yeah, they ARE twins.. XD So it's pretty modern. Why, of course. I should've guessed so from the Prologue. O__o You switch from present to past tense a lot. I know, it's 1st person and all, but... hm, sorry for being a smart-aleck. Did you edit this yet? Because your Prologue was more with one tense, I think. I remember Lorelei. It's not the same people, then, huh... I see. NnK.
Need 'n' Know 2007-07-11 ch 1,	abuseResistance groups, I love resistance groups! huggles And then we're going to meet more people with weird names... yeah, that's the hard part. I just gotta keep in mind. And you haven't changed the name of the country at the top, L.L. You must remember to! Well, it's kinda past midnight, and I gotta go. But I'll remind myself to come back. :// And where have you been? haven't... heard from you... cries On your bio page, I mean, you haven't been updating this. Oh, no, come back!! NnK.
xoxstorii-gurrlxox 2007-02-16 ch 11,	abuseHeyy..this is such an awesome story. My favorite chapter was chapter 8, that I think was the most funny chapter ever. Anywho, I have to say though, I love the long chapters, but the spelling is kind of confusing. But either than that I am waiting impatiently for you to update. SO HURRY! Hehe. XxTaylorXx
dizappearingirl 2006-12-13 ch 6,	abuseAHAHAHAHA! I laughed out loud (and so hard!) when she contacted Sen's mother! Ha ha! I like the relationship between her and Zaint's group. They are bad, but they are kinda treated as half-enemies (sort of an amusing enemy...?). Well, it was funny nonetheless. Sing away Minna! OH, and the whole conversation with her Grandfather was great as well, so amusing. So, the two of them were speaking a different language...? Cool indeed. I love all the relationships among your characters! Good stuff! Good times good times...^_^ PS: My sis's bday was the fifth too! That's fun...
dizappearingirl 2006-12-13 ch 4,	abuseHa ha...ha...So, I didn't realize you were writing the rest of the story in another place--ack! I completely missed it! I can't believe myself...sigh... WELL, tis wonderful and AMAZING! I thought I would review every couple chaps and tell you this. ^_^ I love the twins, SO AMUSING! I can't wait til they visit their family. They sound like real characters! Minettes...lol...I love the banter and wit! The pics on your profile are so cool! I just checked them out! ^-^
Darklight Shadow 2006-08-23 ch 12,	abuseAww... how sad.. I hope your grandfather gets well soon!! :P
Darklight Shadow 2006-06-27 ch 11,	abuseOh god.. I hink I'm starting to like Raiden as well!! And I'm so glad Kleara is back again.. what is her power again?? Anyway.. great chapter!! I hope you are going to update soon coz I really love your story!!
Darklight Shadow 2006-05-31 ch 10,	abuseGreat chapter!! Even though it was very long!! I love this chapter!!
demiXgod 2006-03-17 ch 9,	abuse"Genesis..." interesting name choice, Lynx. I like that word alot, mind me. It's curious that you'd pick the last name "Tempest," because I'm writing a short story called "level 6 tempest," but it's not going on fp.So, the good and the bad. I'll start with the bad (ick!) since it's a shorter list!In the last chapter, kleara mentioned that she had terrakinetic powers, but terrakinesis doesn't include plant manipulation. that would be "chlorakinesis" and the reason why i separated the two in my own story as Earth and Chlora. But it doesn't really matter, because in fantasy, some do consider plants to be earthen. also, there were some grammatical errors but that can be fixed with a beta. I used to have one but she quit on me (the nerve!)On the positive side, Minna pwns. I think I mentioned that already, but she kicked that hybrid's butt. Also, the plot development gets two thumbs up!! At first, Choler and Pain reminded me of the ra'zac, but they are actually quite different. Oh, and semmion makes me laugh! He's such a wimp! But i love how he stands up for his "annoying" sister. Anywho, Minna rocks, GENESIS rocks, Xane rocks, Semm's a wimp, krell's mean. I hope minna breaks his legs!!
demiXgod 2006-03-16 ch 8,	abusejeez...these chapters are getting longer and longer every time i blink! Which is fine for me, but bad news for my printer :{Minna. Pwns.Um...when I read that part about "Zaint is a hottie," i first misread it as "Xane is a hottie" and got confused by his indifference in the next paragraph! I need to work on my reading skillz."The water was freezing, like knives biting at my skin" i loved that line. did i mention minna's my favorite?
Diana 2006-03-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell been awhile since I read the first few chapters, and couldnt control myself. Stayed up most the night reading all you have done. Amazing use of characters and story. I absolutely loved the dragon chapter. I felt as if I was there, the more I read--I was drawn into your world. Thats an amazing gift for a writer ya know:)! Wish you would finish, so I can go to see this at the movies, or even a video game. Would'nt that be cool.Ok, now for a small critisism. There are some common mistakes such as using lose for loose, etc., some minor typos and words left out. Suggestion, take a little more time to proof read before you post. Overall though this is truly a work of art!!
Darklight Shadow 2006-03-13 ch 9,	abuseYou rule!! This story's so good!! How come Choler and Pain seemed to honour her like a queen?? And I kinda hope that the two of them were truly afraid of Minna and not because Kleara told them to leave them alone!! Is Bane Kara?? And how come the two of them are special?? With more powerful abilitites or what?? And were all nine of them human before they were altered?? Really good chapter!! I love it to pieces!! You are going into my Favorite Author list!!
Darklight Shadow 2006-03-13 ch 8,	abuseHey!! You updated at last!! I thought you haven't so I asked you what happened to your story but then I am too lazy to change it again.. haizz.. I'm going to read the next chapter another time.. maybe later if my mum doesn't kill me for facing the computer for such a long time!! Anyway.. I love Kleara!! The way she and Xane 'terrorize' the twins!! Very good chapter!! Able to control earth.. hmm.. maybe I should learn that ability and just open a hole on the ground and gobble my school up!!

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