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| Aimee Raven 2005-08-04 ch 1, | Wow...you're a genius!! So talented...this is going on my faves list, it's just such a powerful poem...it's...ah...I'm at loss for words. Love, Mia |
| AntiPleasure 2005-07-30 ch 1, | I love how you always include a little italtic statement underneath the title, effective for the poem. "our existence is a parody of normality" that statement pretty much sums up the point of your poem and you treated the rest well with your words, perfect. Jenna xoxo |
| dusk orchid 2005-07-13 ch 1, | Wow. That was utterly brilliant in many stages. Amazing use of vocabulary. I was taken away with your sharp verses. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-07-12 ch 1, | Perfect ending. Gave off a very spiritual feel. Brava. |
| Ohmm 2005-07-12 ch 1, | I love the depth accompanied by your lyrical tone and magnificient choice of words. Well done! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-11 ch 1, | Brilliant in all its facets. |