Wow...you're a genius!! So talented...this is going on my faves list, it's just such a powerful poem...it's...ah...I'm at loss for words. Love, Mia

I love how you always include a little italtic statement underneath the title, effective for the poem. "our existence is a parody of normality" that statement pretty much sums up the point of your poem and you treated the rest well with your words, perfect.

Jenna xoxo

Wow. That was utterly brilliant in many stages. Amazing use of vocabulary. I was taken away with your sharp verses.

Perfect ending. Gave off a very spiritual feel. Brava.

I love the depth accompanied by your lyrical tone and magnificient choice of words. Well done!

Brilliant in all its facets.