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Reviews For: occulere

Aimee Raven
2005-08-04
ch 1,
Wow...you're a genius!! So talented...this is going on my faves list, it's just such a powerful poem...it's...ah...I'm at loss for words. Love, Mia
AntiPleasure
2005-07-30
ch 1,
I love how you always include a little italtic statement underneath the title, effective for the poem. "our existence is a parody of normality" that statement pretty much sums up the point of your poem and you treated the rest well with your words, perfect.

Jenna xoxo
dusk orchid
2005-07-13
ch 1,
Wow. That was utterly brilliant in many stages. Amazing use of vocabulary. I was taken away with your sharp verses.
Aslan Israel
2005-07-12
ch 1,
Perfect ending. Gave off a very spiritual feel. Brava.
Ohmm
2005-07-12
ch 1,
I love the depth accompanied by your lyrical tone and magnificient choice of words. Well done!
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-07-11
ch 1,
Brilliant in all its facets.
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