Perfect

Oh, wow. The imagery in this is lovely.

Broken, but all tied together to create a beautiful image. I do like the way you format, it reminds me of the way I write.

Jenna xoxo

It takes a special kind of talent to write short poems. I certanly don't have it. You obviously do. I normally am not as fond of short poems that don't rhyme, But I like this. Lots.

PS. Thanks for the review.

short &heartbreakingly beautiful.

going on favorites.

Rich with beautiful diction and imagery.