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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 9,   | I love the first line. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 8, | So true. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 7, | Nice topic. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 6, | Very sincere. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 5, | Fun, love the "pig of happiness." |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 4, | Yes, indeed! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 3, | Nice verbs. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 2, | I esp like the first line. |
| Melkiah Carnahan 2006-05-03 ch 1, | that is awsome for only three lines!! Love yeah kim Leah |
| Jedi Christ 2006-02-17 ch 1, | Lovely as always Kimmie. -- JC |
| Andante con Brio 2005-12-27 ch 1, | Beautifully said, Ryenon. |
| Icthoid Matro Coselos 2005-12-21 ch 1, | aww, this is so cool! i mean... it could mean something completely different to someone else. The vagueness is kind of specific to the reader... gotta love it! thanks for sharing! |
| Raven Kay 2005-11-09 ch 1, | Short but sweet. Great work. |
| hoellenwauwau 2005-07-12 ch 1, | well, sadly it's true...great job, nevertheless!cio, hoellenwauwau |
| Endless Nightmares 2005-07-12 ch 1, | Hello- Wonderful haiku. So much you can say in 3 lines. Great job on this one! I can clearly see a man or woman fading away. |