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| K. Silence 2007-07-20 ch 1,  | abusewell golly gee willikers mister, that was some kinda poetry there! my favorite is this line. With it I dart and jab like Olympian lances. jab, boy, jab!! haha |
| ScarletNeko 2007-05-23 ch 1, | abuseYay for other poetry smut writers! You remind me of myself, it makes me happy. So does this poem. Detail is.. lovely. |
| blind-ambition 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseNow I feel all embarassed and dirty. Erotic poems do that to me. Ah well. At least it was writing well (very well). I'm suprised this hasn't been removed yet. But yeah, it was very well written. zzCheerSzz |
| Baron Sanity 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI really really like it. Write more please. |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseOh no. I think I'm jealous now. Excellent rhyming and beautiful imagery. Who wouldn't be jealous? Besides, if it makes you hot it's a good poem and or story. Love this poem. -Alexiel |
| ChobiMM3 2005-09-08 ch 1, | abuseNice. Cool. Hah, it's really good. Sorry for sounding like an idiot but I can never type good reviews. Anyway, it's a nice, dirty poem. haha. Keep up the good work Chobi PS. I updated Take me With You Forever, in case you wated to know. |
| K. Silence 2005-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abusei don't really feel like signing in, or beginning sentences with capitol letters. nice, dirty poem. it made me feel like a dirty girl. everyone loves a good head job. later dogg. hehe. -silence |
| flaming.footprints 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseerotic and beautiful, sensual imagery. ~Shavo |
| Phantasa 2005-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was interesting and very good. |
| MorbidTruth 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThat's...hot. *sigh* whew! Good writing. I don't know many people who can write a good rhyming poem but you really pulled it off! Good job! |
| Tabi Berkey 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseperfectly lovely...delicious |
| Miss Nancy 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseSweet poem! One of my faves. |
| Camreon 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abusegood poem. as usual. artistically descriptive and totally awesome.~baby ** rae~ |
| freedom of speech 2005-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHa, that was great! you are so outstandingly sick in the mind, it goes beyond insanity to brillancy. I must say, that is good work. You're so mindset aganist your poems, but they are really good. |
| Sour-Chan 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was pretty good. ^^; Its almost like a song and such. It flows nice. XP |