Reviews for An Afternoon at the Petting Zoo

Reviews For: An Afternoon at the Petting Zoo

BreathingFlames 2006-07-16 ch 1,	abuseLlamas make me squee. And so does your story. squee See? It's beautiful. I heart it.
Siyaa 2006-07-16 ch 1,	abuseLlamas! That was awesome. All the characters were interesting and the story flowed well. Yay llamas!
poet tree 2006-04-24 ch 1,	abuseHa ha, cute. And Deveraux is creepy.
pneumothorax 2005-10-03 ch 1,	abuseSimple and short and some nice lines. e.g. 'Naturally, in the face of such beauty, Isaiah’s ability to put his foot in his mouth made itself quite apparent' part, and the hit-on-the-head ramblings amused me.
I've-seen-the-fairies 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abuseAw! It was so cute! Are you going to update YSomN soon? I'm waiting! Did you know I'm up to chapter six now on LdiLT? You haven't been reviewing.
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-12 ch 1,	abuseWell, I've read two of the llama stories already, so I figured I'd read this one too (seeing as you /are/ the one who issued the challenge.) First thing I noticed was 'ohmygod, the alpaca has my dad's name' and I fell into a fit of giggles. Stupid, I know, but I couldn't help it. That alone amuses me like hell. That and his ramble at the beginning on the flashback. I love when people get creative with their insults. Lol. Dear god, his boss is made to traumatize people. I pity Isaiah for having to deal with him. petpet But his foot /did/ have nice aim, and the gross bastard deserved it. I LOVE COWBOYS. So I love Lane if only for his appearance. Shallow of me? Maybe. Heh. Adorable that he started to stutter. He didn’t seem like the kind of person that would, so it’s good. The ending was very, very, very cute. loved the whole entire thing Way nice for your first one-shot. (and third person is ** hell, isn’t it?)
Becks-007 2005-07-12 ch 1,	abusethat was funny, you did good. i love llamas, they're so cute.
PridefulShame 2005-07-12 ch 1,	abuseThat's pretty funny. Good story.
AppLEaves 2005-07-12 ch 1,	abuseSo THAT'S the contest's rules, eh? I had heard this contest from xanthofile, but I didn't know if I could submit anything or not. Okay, back to the story. I found this REALLY cute. I mean, there's nothing cuter than a frustrated like uke (?) bantering with a smart animal. Gotta go and try to make my computer work so that I can type. -Sugar
xanthofile 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abuseOMG that was friggin' funny! i leterally cracked up throughout the entire process! rubs aching ribs TOO CUTE! it was wonderful for a first one shot! it realy was...you don't really have a problem at all. and a cowboy? wow...i need one now! runs off in search of a rodeo man
myepiphany 2005-07-11 ch 1, anon.	abuse((clutches aching sides)) That was SO good. I'm not even kidding. Like, holy cow. It wasn't just good because it was..well...you know, amazing. But it was good because you took a challenge about a LLAMA and made an awesome story! I think you're the only person I know who could do that. Amazing. And Lane! Whew. ((fans self)) he's hot. I'm not usually for cowboy types but throw in a stutter and I'm gone. Lovely. I heart you!
Naomi Schemer 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abuseHehe, Alpacas are awesome...This story is adorable, but I wonder, who created the challenge?
swaggering curses 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abuseI just wanted to say that "the Volvo of the llama world" is possibly the best line that I have read in many days. =)

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