Amazing. I don't even know what to say.

...wow. That's really interesting. It's hard to tell what's actually real and what isn't.

That was pretty good. It was really interesting. Nice job.

Interesting...

Whoa... that's so cool!! I was hooked as soon as I read the first word. I loved how the narrator wouldn't give up their now-dead umbrella, that was the cool part. And the entire conspiricy part, just... awesome!

This is the Dragonlady, signing off!

Interesting.. I'm not too sure what to make of it, but it is different, and a good read. Nice job :)

well. that was very confusing but i think i got it. I think.

:) CD