OH WOW. Well, I picked up the names. Lucien and Gabrielle = Lucifer and Gabriel. So very clever. I love your straightforward writing; very good!

AAW! Way to go! Love it!! Ok, so I kinda got the names figured out, I think. Gabrielle = Archangel, Lucien = devil like figure? Am I right? Great story. The ending rocks my socks! So kawaii! Lurve!

hahahahaha, great ending! That was really good, like it a lot. too bad it's a one shot, it'd be great if you could continue it!

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AW! that is so SWEET! i loved it! keep up the good work^_^

Aw! That was the cutest ending!

Love the name thing. Rock. I've done it myself, but never on anything posted. Great job.