Casey you need to find a magazine for this one. This is just too damn good to be putting out there on FictionPress, talented as hell and you need to find it a print home. If anything send it to Alfred Hitchcock Magazine because this has a vibe worthy of Hitchcock. I've been watching your career now for awhile and you're showing your real versitility in your voice. First you did just Horror, now you're doing Science Fiction and then suspense. You got heart, and don't let places like gothic.net take that away from you. Ladies and Gentlemen, Mr. Casey Gordon is the next generation of dark fiction. Take notes because he will influence heavy metal bands. I think I could talk to a few people who could help you get this story published; I am very impressed with this one.