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unspecified 2006-07-13 ch 1,	abusei've been there, and i've been trying to write about it, but i can't.. thanks for the encouragement keep writing
Miss-India 2006-04-25 ch 1,	abuseThat was excellent in a dark sort of way. You really got me in the emotion. Keep it up.
Idiot Pilot 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abuseThe last three lines were the most powerful. It was a piece that sent goosebumps on my legs, especially knowing that it was a true story.
les petits bateaux 2005-12-25 ch 1,	abuseRape is a sad and horrifying thing indeed. The way you described how reluctant she was and how much she wanted to let herself go from the man was very heart-wrenching. Good job expressing the matter. ~~Trinity
djsaxon2 2005-10-12 ch 1,	abuseI was going to leave less than flattering comments on one of your recent works, but decided i should get a better feel for your work first. Considering how incredibly powerful this is, i don't think i'll bother criticising what is obviously not your best. This is amazing. Good work, and well done one expressing yourself in such an eloquant and simple way. I won't pity you and tell you i'm sorry for what happened to you, but i will tell you you show amazing strength after it. Sax.[reviews are appreciated]
Vague Lenore 2005-10-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, I'm so sorry. There's nothing else to say.
Dark Fairie 2005-09-24 ch 1,	abuseAnd he kneed him in the ball.I'm not sure what you mean there but this was written vivedly. Did it realy happen to you? I can't tell you why but I feel comfored after reading it.
InvictusFides4 2005-09-01 ch 1,	abuseI just read your poem it was really deep. You are a very brave person Im sorry, but hold on and keep venting your anger through writing.
Parfume 2005-07-28 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was very emotional. I'm glad you put your poem up, so many people will understand how much raping will scar someone. I give you props for putting this up!
Slugabed 2005-07-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt's sick. Absolutely revolting. I don't know why you'd have it here. Attention, perhaps? I don't know. It's written well, though you have a few errors. Ugh. I can't believe it.
AubriannaKnight 2005-07-23 ch 1,	abuseawe, that's very sad that happened. i admire you for having the courage to write about it and post it on the site. it's a very powerful poem with a lesson in it to be learned. gr i wish i could give that guy a few swift kicks to the balls and make him non functional
StoryJunkie 2005-07-18 ch 1,	abuseAnd the lesson is: always go to the bar with your GIRL friend, and leave stray dogs outside.
Rachael 2005-07-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is a subject that had sometimes come very close to home, it has never happened to me, but I've seen it happen to friends. I admire you a lot for being able to write and post this, it shows a lot of strength I wish my friends had had. Thanks for posting this was a really wonderful peice of work, and written beautifull despite the content.~Rach
kAIT REDFERN 2005-07-17 ch 1,	abuseIt was really brave of you to post this on here and I fully admire you for it. I wouldn't have the guts or strength to write this if I was in your situation so Fiction.press does not have any right to kick you off for writing this. This was very emotional, powerful stuff. Really well written. Luv Kaitx
Shattered Heart a Broken Dr... 2005-07-14 ch 1,	abuseIf anyone tries to get you kicked off let me know cuz i'll go to bat for you. I don't know you, but I know unfortunately many friends who have been raped and it makes me furious because I can't help. I am sorry this happened to you, you are very strong to write about it I can't exev begin to wonder how you found the strength to write this with the fear you must have had about rejection. I bow to you, and hope you can find happiness again

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