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Reviews For: SHORT STORY CENTRAL

Halfbloodlycan
2007-05-13
ch 2,
abuseAll I can say is Aw...that's so cute!
Agapantha
2007-05-11
ch 1,
abuseWow, loved your short story, it was very mysterious, exactly how a short story should be. I didn't understand the bit about the demon, though, but I loved the bit at the top about her having to grab onto the pole. I know you've written it as a short story, but i think this could be expanded if you wanted to turn it into a full length novel.
Nami Weaver
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseIt was juvenile in style, (I.E. the "evil step-mom" bits and the revelation) but considering it was from the point of view of a young teenager, it's permissible. That said, I do think you have talent. Keep writing and you'll get even better!
Halfbloodlycan
2006-12-12
ch 1,
abuseAw. You know me you just don't know it yet. Anyways that was luverly. (Yeah, I know how to spell, it's funnier that way).
Nicole.Nachel
2005-07-22
ch 1,
abuseI thought it was lovely. - Mel I liked it because it was all depressing and the authors note was perky.

I like it. - Nikki
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