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| Halfbloodlycan 2007-05-13 ch 2, | abuseAll I can say is Aw...that's so cute! |
| Agapantha 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, loved your short story, it was very mysterious, exactly how a short story should be. I didn't understand the bit about the demon, though, but I loved the bit at the top about her having to grab onto the pole. I know you've written it as a short story, but i think this could be expanded if you wanted to turn it into a full length novel. |
| Nami Weaver 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseIt was juvenile in style, (I.E. the "evil step-mom" bits and the revelation) but considering it was from the point of view of a young teenager, it's permissible. That said, I do think you have talent. Keep writing and you'll get even better! |
| Halfbloodlycan 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseAw. You know me you just don't know it yet. Anyways that was luverly. (Yeah, I know how to spell, it's funnier that way). |
| Nicole.Nachel 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was lovely. - Mel I liked it because it was all depressing and the authors note was perky. I like it. - Nikki |