I like it. Iraq, right? One thing, you might try using a little variation on the part you repeated rather than a complete repition of the whole verse. Repition generally adds more to the poem when used with catchprases and such and not the entire verse. The style is great, you did an execellent job

I really like this piece, and it flows really well. The 'chorus' verse is quite long though so I don't think you need to repeat it so many times. This was really well-written and contained some really good idead - well done

i like this poem it captures the dehumanization that seems to be ripping throughout not only our gov't but our people as well as the rest of the world...it just seems human life is worth nothing nowadays. good job

i love this (well, as a poem), its very powerful. im just finished watching a movie about war journalists and it reminds me of something they wrote, that people at home really dont understand the horror thats going on, they just see the statistics and think 'oh! its a victory'. well, im not sure if that really is connected to ur poem, but it reminded me of that.

And who's this about?

Yep. The sad, sorry truth of our world today.

Iliked this one. It was very emotional without seeming... TOO personal. I mean, it was personal, but... I don't know what I mean. I liked it, though. Very much. Heck, I'll consider this one of my favorites of your political poems! (I hatethis keyboard!)