Nice peom. ^-^

That is such a beautiful poem. I don't normally read poetry, but that one was really good. You should try writing it more often.

nice.. nice.. not too bad..actually, its pretty good. no offence, i dont like the daddy part tho. its a creative and nice touch..n u prob DID write it for your dad..but its too good a romance poem to be given to a dad. lol. i'd put it in a story. :)

Very true. People say they won't hurt you and they still do... it never stops. so depressing. Wonderful job on your poem.

good.. i thought it was well said about your love for your father and that it is really sad. But yes. I love you ~Chelly

a review, since i know personally the relationship/lack thereof, between you and your father, i'd have to say, this poem is probably the best thing you could say about it all. doesn't hit the dark, but keeps the hope right in there.

A really well written poem. The most powerful part, I think, was "I'm sorry I that I left you, Daddy,/But you left long before I." And like I said, it was well written, I think. I know a bunch of English teachers that would love to sing praises about this poem.

I love poetry! And this is a very touching poem. I know exactly how you feel by the way! It really almost made me cry the second time I read it!

Wow! Really powerful! Great emotion. I love poetry, I think you wrote this very well!

I like this poem, it's not as badly writtin as you think. Great job

This poem is full of emotion. Well-written. I like the rythym (ugh i can never spell that word) in it, too.