Very, very good. I love the way you incorporate little minute details into it. You have a talent. Keep going. :D

Oh this is an excellent idea. So original too. I like it. I hope you update too.

Intrigueing. I am very interested, write more, this could turn out to be good!

Oh, Mina, it was so cool! I especially liked the red hair dye description in the beginning... something about it getting pink everywhere and running down the shover, oh I don't know.. don't listen to me. And for some reason the box, all soggy and slimy has stuck in my memory.. Maybe I'm just crazy...?

Hmm, but I definitely approve of this.. a bit creepy but very intriguing at the same time. My curiousity is all sparked now... where on earth are those portals coming from/leading to??

Oh, alright, I'll leave you in peace for now. Wonderful stuff, Mina! I hope you're not in a 'horrid hotel room' anymore... and, well, til next time!

*hugs*

-Inky

Dude, continue it!