hmm. i am far from religious, so the spiritual meaning was lost on me, but this was still very powerful and moving. it was very good. i think that it would have been stronger and more touching if it didn't rhyme, but that's just a matter of opinion. i particularly enjoyed the specific phrase 'she let her wrists cry softly.' that phrase was absolutely great. please keep writing.

Interesting... However, if someone wanted to truly die, they could easily kill themselves. It has a sad, but lovely sentiment over it.