Very intresting story. I love how you've made it about a male sufferer. Anyways i know this hasn't been updated for a while, but i hope you do update soon. Congrats on getting into Oxford uni, though i'm guessing youve graduated now. x

My mom does the same thing that Harriet's does...I was reading it and thinking 'this sounds like the last arguement I had with my mom...' And Pete Doherty is definately hot. Yum.

Still loving it, and admiring the way you can stretch out a story and put so much detail into it... Myself, I just hook on to individual *key events* and then just scramble my way from one key event to the next... Bit like Russell The Davies writes his scripts, I hear... I'll stop the Who chatter now...

Yay for the Doctor Who reference... erm... Bit off topic but cannot wait until the new series starts! Two days!

"it’s like the Pete Doherty of the ice-cream world"

Lovely, just lovely. Enjoying this story very much! :)

this is still really awesome. I love how realistic and like... complete your characters are. (sorry I'm npt great at reviews)

Pretty good chapter, as we get a chance to see things from a different point of view, and what people really think of Tom, rather than what Tom thinks of himself, which are very different. The ending is very interesting, the mother seems really crazy, i'm really intrigued as to why she behaves that way. Keep up the good work. And well done on getting into Oxford =)

Yay, another chapter! Good job, I especially liked the scene after Tom left. Miles can be so judgmental:( Of course, Tom's jumping the gun a little bit on Rodriguez, so fair is fair. Keep up the good work!

~ExaltingDionysian

Hey, this is a really good story, it's taken me a while to finish reading, but it's very insightful to read.I love all the random references about Dr.Who.I hope your results went ok yesterday, I got my A/S, which was all fun.

I love the bantering between the characters, how it seems so natural and yet you work in the attractions the characters have for one another. Your quips and one-liners are fantastic, and I love Rodriguez. Can't think of anything actually intellectual to say, my mind's gone dead.

Thanks for the footnotes at the end of the chapters, for my knowledge of English geography and school systems comes from old E. M. Forster novels, which is rather sad. Good luck on the 18th, hope you get your university.

~ExaltingDionysian

Excellent chapter! I didn't think it was too long at all, and I liked the insight into Harriet's character. She's an interesting one.

I think I've got it! Will it be Tom/Rodriguez? He was mentioned in an earlier chapter.

~ExaltingDionysian

Yay, another good chapter. PLease keep writing.

“An influential idiot.” She corrected him, “Like George Bush, but in female form and with better hair.”

That's the best line ever! Hehehehehe. Great chapter, liked seeing Bill's POV on things. Very nice, please continue soon!~ExaltingDionysian

This story is definitely novel worthy, and the chapters aren't too long. I can't wait for more! I love how you take something as simple as looking for music or deciding what to eat and fit it perfectly into the story. Excellent job!

~ExaltingDionysianP.S. thanx for the review. I tried using X's, but it didn't work. I'll try again later. Toodles!

Another great cahpter. I really think this is an awesomly written story. and I like the long chapters. update soon.

also, I love Radiohead.