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| sketchingaCYNiC 2005-10-31 ch 1,  | abuseHMM. i thought this story was oh-kay. brayden was kind of.. i don't know. a bit iffy, a bit stereotypical... but i liked leah's character. your writing style's excellent. :] but the development moves kind of fast -- leah's having second thoughts in the beginning, but now she's all expert on seducing guys toward the end. *shrugs* oh wells~ keep writing ^_^ |
| remae 2005-07-30 ch 1, | abuseAh..why'd you have to make it one shot? Haha. Well, I really like this story it's so cute. (Well..right now I'm thinking any romance story is cute because I just watched One Fine Day..haha) Anyways, I like your writing! |
| EvilOstrich 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseIt rox keep it up ! |
| HatredsGirl 2005-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice story. I like it so far. Keep writing! |
| CyberBird 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abuseXD that's really good, nice strong ending I loved it! |
| Proud Marcher 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. Now who's story is very well written? XP Please, keep going! |
| tiggershan87 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abusethis is really good your a great writer. hurry with the next chapters to all your storys. |
| Juley 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseThis story is really cute, I love it. |