"Which Gives/Happiness a chance." "Escaping the sky."

I love it.

I loved the feel and the way this poem was set out.Though it doesn't seem like it, it must have been a well thought out poem - atleast on the sub-conscious level.Great poem.And a Great read for me.I'll just be rummaging through your other poems while I'm here...

Great rhyming! It has such a light, happy feel to it.

wow, pretty imagery that portrays such emotions~~ good work

keep writing!

how beautiful... *jaw drops*

Such a soothing poem, (try different formats.) Aside from that, no complaints what-so-ever. -ADD

Wow, this is beautiful! Though, certain lines don't seem to fit. This song seems to thrive on a three-syllable beat, with some words squashed down to fit easily ino the beat. But on two lines there are only two syllables, which don't quite fit into the rythmn. It's really good, though, I really liked it!

Nice beat to it.

i like the melodic way you write. this poem's really nice.