|Reviews for Power Drain|
| ADSpencer 12/16/06 . chapter 5
Good story. Could have been way longer though. Nice ending!
| ADSpencer 12/16/06 . chapter 2
A few grammatical errors but I really liked this chapter. Nicely done. Super heroes rock (DC fan here)-as do the villains...Anyhow, good job.
| ADSpencer 12/16/06 . chapter 1
Interesting beginning. I like it. However, one little thing-I think that the secondary characters are almost too flat. Giving them a name, or even a nickname, wouldn't be a bad idea. Describing, for example, the thieves by their hair is rather vague-a name would give them more essense.
Anyhow, just a suggestion.