Good story. Could have been way longer though. Nice ending!

A few grammatical errors but I really liked this chapter. Nicely done. Super heroes rock (DC fan here)-as do the villains...Anyhow, good job.

Interesting beginning. I like it. However, one little thing-I think that the secondary characters are almost too flat. Giving them a name, or even a nickname, wouldn't be a bad idea. Describing, for example, the thieves by their hair is rather vague-a name would give them more essense.

Anyhow, just a suggestion.