|Reviews for old girl|
| GirlxAnachronism 4/12/06 . chapter 1
This is really good. a poem of hope is what it makes me think of. i have no clue if this was your intention. But eaither way i like it
| Juni 3/20/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful, you *should* like it. Amazing ending, so !
| citrus scented 8/31/05 . chapter 1
this is incredible. the imagery and descriptions almost overwelming, real quality of writing. i espeacilly love: "bleached white like sun-dried sun-kissed bones" chilling, haunting and thoughtprovoking. love it.
| pneumothorax 8/17/05 . chapter 1
Personally professional. I like it. 'bleached white like sun-dried sun-kissed bones.' is a strong image. 'scored by gunfire,' I like too.
| the twinkling of an eye 7/18/05 . chapter 1
Absolutely stunning piece. Terrific imagery and atmosphere. I love your repetition and rhythm. Awesome!
| addie pray 7/12/05 . chapter 1
Fantastic descriptions in this. I love the line "(no phoenix rising for this city of ashes)".