'tis lovely

EB

i like i like...very good...anyways...keep writing...RingWraith

its hard to understand but i think it's cute.

I love the pace and then the change with her life just beginning.

Hmm...you may not have known what you were writing about, but obviously your subconscious did. Good job, it's very descriptive and poetic sounding, if you know what I'm saying.

i love the last 4 lines...breathtaking...keep it up...

~TheBrokenWanderer~